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If I Died

If I died, if I didn't exist,
Would you feel pain, would you feel bliss,
Would the heavens cry or the demons sing,
Would you feel the burn, would you feel the sting,
Would the lies be truth, would content become regret,
Would you remember me, would you forget,
Would you fall to your knees, would you begin to cry,
Would you ever be able to say goodbye…


I want you to hurt; I want you to grieve,
I want you to stay and never leave,
Miss me, want me, never let go,
Your happiness, your joy, to me you owe,
As I ready to mount the reaper's horse,
I want you to bathe in everlasting remorse,
May your heart bleed, may the wound never heal,
May you pray, beg, and wish for one last feel,
A good thing is gone; you did not treat me well,
My desires, your denial, I'll see you in hell
This is another aspect of human nature. Not only do many of us wonder what people would think if we died, but that one person who may deny their feelings and barricade you for so long, would they feel regret for shunning all that time, and the most spilling question, would you enjoy their pain?
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NovaAkita Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014
Oh my gods. This is fucking beautiful. The raw energy and emotion put into this is wow.  This is speechless I am.
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ObsessedWivCaelan Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Student Artist
your rhymes are so touching :) i feel this way about people...
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Malachi1991 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
whaaaaaaaaat??? This is dope as hell baby bro. Like some educated, emo, fuck you, realist stuff! I don't even think I could write this good.
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Dipshtick92 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Writer
haha thx bro! I try
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azaleapeaock Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011   Writer
this is epicness
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Dipshtick92 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Student Writer
lol thank you!
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MMDanielson Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Professional General Artist
I hate to say it, but yes I would enjoy their pain.
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Dipshtick92 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Student Writer
lol you arent the only one
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HorsesofPoseidon Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a very good piece of work. I love the perspective as you explained in the comments, and you put words to it so beautifully :aww:
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Dipshtick92 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And course, who couldn't relate? lol
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